Here goes nothing.

Write an erotic story with me. My story is all [meaningful looks] and [horny?desperate? attractive? characters]. It’s boring. Yawns.

Seriously. You post something in a comment, then I’ll post something, etc., round robin, y’all take turns, someone else, then me, yet another writer, then me…ahem. I’ll post the whole thing with a link to you (or not, whatever).

I have one character stripping and one character in the audience enjoying it (“I’ve Put A Spell On You” and “I’ve Put A Spell On You, 2“). This is not erotic. It needs sex. That’s where I get boring and you get busy.

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6 thoughts on “Orgy By Pen

  1. If you want sex, the two must come together, the one doing the stripping and the one enjoying the stripping. If you want the sex to be hot, they must come together in an unconventional or unexpected way…

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      • Something that needs to be resolved first: does her husband show up for the show? Is the individual enjoying dance someone she knows? Or used to know, perhaps? That’s interesting to me. It’s for charity, right? He donates big, prompting an introductory conversation after her dance…

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      • Oooo a donation! That’s a great device! I figured she has an idea who he’s cheating with and plans to strip looking vaguely like her. She tells him she can’t go but the other woman is part of the show. Husband takes bait. Then the donation…

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      • At some point the husband must witness the meeting between the stripper character and the donor…who is absolutely smitten and btw younger and a tad better looking than the husband. Does he realize the stripper is his wife at some point? Wouldn’t he become quite jealous at the threat of another man’s covetous gaze??

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  2. The story is erotic. The way you describe the dance, the movement of her body, her responses…the movement of the beads…the way they shimmer, how they look…fantastic details. All this sensory stuff is sexy…creates the heat surrounding the actual act of sex—which as we know should be the culmination–the peak of all this desire you are creating with your words…keep going!

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